The graph details the average rainfall received by England ranging over a time period of 12 months for the year 2004.
The graph depicts that the country of England receives a fairly variable amount of rainfall ranging from mild showers in the initial months of the year to heavy rainfall in the months from July to November. The rainfall received in the month of January measured to about 50mm but gradually fell in the subsequent months from February to May.
The months of June and July again began to see a resurgence in the rainfall received with amount rainfall being received increasing up to 60mm. The rainfall received remained fairly stable in the months from August to November only with a minor drop in the month of October. The months between November to December seemed to be recording the heaviest amount of rainfall with scale touching almost about 65mm. Towards the end of the moth of December the rainfall seemed to be subsiding as the amount of rainfall received fell way below 50mm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll in the months from July to November. The rainfall received in the month of Janua...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sequent months from February to May. The months of June and July again began to ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l being received increasing up to 60mm. The rainfall received remained fairly stabl...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h a minor drop in the month of October. The months between November to December see...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8323699422 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35453897553 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479768786127 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0766108873 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175201354008 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100221229099 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503996227982 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13853586329 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277459048983 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.