Recent surveys have shown that the best possible solution to world's environmental crisis is increasing the prices of fuel.
In my opinion, only increasing the fuel prices is a crude way to overcome environmental crisis. In addition to this solution other frontiers of alternative fuels should be explored and other environmental friendly steps should also be taken.
In the current scenario, globalization is fast spreading in the world as a result of which the amount of vehicular traffic has increased. An increase in vehicular traffic has caused an increased demand of fuels which in turn has caused environmental crisis with the reasons being depleting fuel reserves and increasing pollution. Increasing fuel prices may sound as a most efficient in the short term as increased prices deter the public from using private vehicles and relying more public transport. However, this may result in inflation in the long run which may be devastating for the world economy as a whole.
Several clean and alternative fuel options such as solar and hydro-electricity are present which although not completely feasible yet may act as an viable replacement for fossil fuels with further researches and developments.In the meantime, other solutions such as Odd-even rule to limit vehicular traffic on road and increasing and building better connectivity using public transports can be used effectively to limit the increasing crisis helping in the long run.
In conclusion, only increasing the prices of fuels to limit environmental problems may not be the most efficient solution in the long run.
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Cambridge ielts 5, page 36
- The figure gives information about smoking habit of the UK population by age Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The following appears in a letter to the editor for the West Lansburg News: "The tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of West Lansburg. Ancient records suggest that the tufted groundhog once numbered in the millions. Since they were declared a w 50
- The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is increase the price of fuel. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 39
- The graph below describes rainfall statistics for Somecountry. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...friendly steps should also be taken. In the current scenario, globalization is ...
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Line 6, column 146, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... not completely feasible yet may act as an viable replacement for fossil fuels wit...
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Line 6, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ith further researches and developments.In the meantime, other solutions such as O...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37051792829 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0455607156 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513944223108 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.381331324 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.777777778 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24643242947 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130989006581 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831324171065 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17346414056 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639376294629 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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