The given line graph illustrates that how much amount of energy is consumed in united states of America from 1980 to 2012,and projected consumption to 2030 and is measured in Quadrillion units.
Overall,renewable resources are stayed low,such as a Nuclear power,Solar/Wind energy,Hydropower when compared to non-renewable resources like Petrol and Oil,Coal,Natural gas over a period of 50 years.Although,there is a usage of nuclear energy sources the US will continue to rely on fossil fuels.
From 1980 to 1987,petrol and oil are the dominant fuel sources throughout this period,with 35 quadrillion (35q)units used in 1980,rising to 42q in the year 2012.Despite all these fluctuation,from 1995 there was a steady increase.This is expected,to continue around 47q in 2030.Coal and Natural gas are similar to each other whereas,initially coal rose to 18q and natural gas fall to 16q.At some point,they both combined in 1985 to 1990 and with some fluctuations coal considerably increased to 31q in 2030.However,gas is depicted to 19q in 2030.In 1980,energy from nuclear,solar/wind and hydropower are started at 4q.Both solar and nuclear powers are steadily increased to 7q and 6q respectively but hydropower fallen back to 1980 figure.It is expected to maintain this level until 2030.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58163265306 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8445020161 2.65546596893 145% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663265306122 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 22.4926829268 289% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 258.539917399 43.030603864 601% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 364.666666667 112.824112599 323% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.3333333333 22.9334400587 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 5.23603664747 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 1.69756097561 1532% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13879278116 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972778564083 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608234869874 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972778564083 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608234869874 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.5 13.2329268293 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 61.2550243902 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 10.3012195122 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.94 8.06136585366 148% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.9970731707 255% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.