The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The illustration given provides past and projection information of energy consumption in USA during the period of 50 years.
Firstly, observing from petrol and oil, with a sharp decline of 5 from 35 in 1950 to 30 in 1985, the amount of consumed energy in USA are observed with increasing tendencies in a period of 35 years before reaching a peak of almost 50 in 2030 due to the projection.
Secondly, regarding from coal and natural gas, the initial numbers of coal and natural gas in 1980 are over 16 units and 20 units, respectively. Despite a significant fluctuation over 25 years, coal is expected to score at a higher number of 30 compared to those of natural gas which is projected to stabilize constantly at about 23 from 2015 to 2030.
Thirdly, according to three remaining sections, in spite of the similar units of 3 in 1980, the numbers of nuclear versus solar wind from 1990 to the projection of 2030 are correspondingly 5 to 7 versus 4 to 5. While hydropower experience stabile trends to reach approximately 3, being the least significant number of total sectors.
Overall, petrol and oil dominates the entire proportion of energy consumption while hydropower is a factor with the lowest numbers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84134615385 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95975455138 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572115384615 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5597533282 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.857142857 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244588942063 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105952568225 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617221934913 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131454517905 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438170628647 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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