Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Applying the educational policy of separating schools according to sex which is supported by some people is facing to many multi-dimensional opinions, as others state that the effectiveness of schooling may be intensively more profound to the process of teaching and studying from integrated schools. Personally judging,
Firstly, with the existence of single-gender education, the schools may possess appropriate-taught approaches to the development of characteristic and physic of one sex. In detail, because of the obvious differences between two sexes, the education methods can primarily concentrate on a specific gender to provide a considerable effectiveness for co-gender students in multiple skills, such as strength-required sports or severe training, leading to an optimizing levels of the progress of learning. Additionally,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... integrated schools. Personally judging, Firstly, with the existence of single-ge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 119.0 315.596192385 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05882352941 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.79176946981 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.756302521008 0.561755894193 135% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8009826071 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 240.333333333 106.682146367 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.6666666667 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840700777611 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508961996723 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620249887859 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725971521485 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061163212878 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.51 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.46 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.6 8.58950901804 147% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 22.5 9.78957915832 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.