The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992.
The table illustrates the proportion of countries such as Canada, Japan, Peru and Angola, according to four types of social and economic indicators in 1994 and information provided by United Nations statistics.
Overall, the highest catagory was daily calorie supply per person which was several times more than the rest. The lowest indicators could be seen in the catagory of adult literacy rate, especially in Angola. The figure of Canada was generally higher than the other three states.
With regards to daily calorie supply per person, canadians consumed the most at 3326. The indicators of Japan was also high (2846) compared to Peru which consumed the least 2000 calorie. Life expectancy at birth in Canada and Japan was closer to 80 years, but in Peru and Angola it barely reached 50 years. Annual income per person (in dollars US) according to these indicators, Japan was in the first place since in paid 15,760 dollars and Canada paid about 10,000 dollars.
If we compare Canada with Japan we can see that they are good competitors and their performance is satisfactory. However Peru and Angola lag far behind these countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... and their performance is satisfactory. However Peru and Angola lag far behind these co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07446808511 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49038440531 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643617021277 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1671171148 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0180092961338 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00614134120929 0.103423049105 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0123238472875 0.0843802449381 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0120772755317 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135868945118 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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