Essay topics:
The graph below show the amount spend by teenagers on the fast food in britain . The units are amount spends is pounds per week in the first figure income group grams per week in the secound figer.
The given line graph reveals the fast food in britain . It is clear hamburgers . Fish chips and pizza . The years 1970 and 1985 . It is collaborate pound per week and gram per week.
It can be seen that high income it is increased and 50 per week pound . However in fish chips it decreased finished that 30 per week pound . Whereever pizza it is well down in and per week pound. Secondly is 1970 in .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e graph reveals the fast food in britain . It is clear hamburgers . Fish chips and...
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Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...food in britain . It is clear hamburgers . Fish chips and pizza . The years 1970 a...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... clear hamburgers . Fish chips and pizza . The years 1970 and 1985 . It is collabo...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hips and pizza . The years 1970 and 1985 . It is collaborate pound per week and gr...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'collaborated'.
Suggestion: collaborated
...pizza . The years 1970 and 1985 . It is collaborate pound per week and gram per week. ...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orate pound per week and gram per week. It can be seen that high income it is in...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...me it is increased and 50 per week pound . However in fish chips it decreased fini...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...it is increased and 50 per week pound . However in fish chips it decreased finished tha...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ecreased finished that 30 per week pound . Whereever pizza it is well down in and ...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... and per week pound. Secondly is 1970 in .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, secondly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 5.0 33.7804878049 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 326.0 965.302439024 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 75.0 196.424390244 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34666666667 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.94283095638 3.73543355544 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17182762141 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 44.0 106.607317073 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 86.4 283.868780488 30% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 8.0 22.4926829268 36% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.2821800929 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 36.2222222222 112.824112599 32% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.33333333333 22.9334400587 36% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354926523247 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127479418342 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130241518723 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299189535708 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246921360698 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.2 13.2329268293 24% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 97.2 61.2550243902 159% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 1.7 10.3012195122 17% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.88 11.4140731707 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 40.7170731707 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 11.4329268293 31% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.9970731707 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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