The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four different countries between the years 1967 and 2007.
Looking at the curve for United Kingdom, it is clear that carbon dioxide emission from 1967 to 1977 was almost the same. After 1977 it started to decrease from about 11 metric tonnes to about 7 metric tonnes in the year 2007.
It can be seen from the graph of Sweden that there was a considerable increase in carbon dioxide emission from 1967 to 1977, about 2 metric tonnes. After 1977, there was a steep reduction in the following 10 years period, when it reached to about 7 metric tonnes. Then there was a more gradual decrease reaching less than 6 metric tonnes.
In Italy, emission grew in a rapid fashion from 1967 to 1977, after which the rate of increase was very slow until 1987. In the next decade the rate increased, reaching the emission more than 7 metric tonnes. From 1997 to 2007 the emission was constant.
Portugal has the least amount of emission among the other three countries. It had a gradual increase from 1967 in the next 20 years, after which the emission increased very rapidly until 1997. In the next 10 years the emission was constant in a slightly more than 5 metric tonnes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... from 1967 to 1977 was almost the same. After 1977 it started to decrease from about ...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rapid fashion" with adverb for "rapid"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...etric tonnes. In Italy, emission grew in a rapid fashion from 1967 to 1977, after which the rate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68949771689 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26703936534 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470319634703 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7412398585 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5833333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222945756542 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10275878943 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117746455076 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173083025235 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134756320847 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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