The line graph demonstrates generally the amount of carbon dioxide emitting from citizen of four different nationalities between 1967 and 2007, and the gas is measuring in metric ton.
As can be seen from the diagram, the UK and Sweden, which make up the biggest amount of gas released, witness an downward trend while the figures for two remaining countries follow an upward tendency.
In 1967, the UK, which was the first rank in releasing co2 with nearly 11 tonnes, remained almost constant in 10 years before decreasing gradually to just under 9 tonnes in 2007. By contrast, an Italian generated only 4 tonnes CO2 in the beginning; this amount grew over a half and intersect the figure for Sweden at 7 tonnes in 1987. After peaking double, the CO2 quantity of Italy stayed unchanged until the end of period. In comparison with Italy's consistent trend, Sweden underwent two dramatic climb and drop in tonnes of CO2 discharged between 1967 and 1987 before declining in the next ages. In terms of Portugal, the least amount of co2 was produced initially by each person, however, the proportion of Portuguese went up moderately to hit at an intersection point of above 5 tonnes with the Swedish one.
- Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money making attractions aimed at tourists Others however believe that is the only way to save these traditions Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 87
- Some people think that genetically modified crops are a positive development Others however argue that they are potentially dangerous Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 87
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compari 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...biggest amount of gas released, witness an downward trend while the figures for tw...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...d unchanged until the end of period. In comparison with Italys consistent trend, Sweden un...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'drop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'drops'.
Suggestion: drops
...Sweden underwent two dramatic climb and drop in tonnes of CO2 discharged between 196...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86341463415 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62167780764 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3723678344 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.428571429 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190321417526 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885999076798 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551817920998 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121558807848 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718226939981 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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