The graph gives information about how much Carbon Dioxide in some European countries such as United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal had been emitted over 40-year period.
Looking in more detail, it can be seen that, during a first decade from 1967 to 2007, there were increases of producing CO2 in numbers, with respect to tonnes, for Portugal, Italy and Sweden, reaching about 2, 6 and 10 tonnes, respectively. On the contrary, CO2 emissions stayed approximately fix at 11. After that, between 1977 and 1997, the amount of emission rose gradually to 5.4 and 6.7 for both Portugal and Italy, respectively. Standing in contrast, for the rest countries, the value of releasing pollutant materials steeply dipped in 1987, then was going down steadily in 1997. Also, there was a smooth decrease in numbers of CO2 for United Kingdom in that time. Interestingly, according to the graph, the figure had stable trend in Portugal as well as Italy. However, Sweden and United Kingdom continued falling emissions to 5 and 9 for each.
Overall, what stands out from the figures reveal that most areas where emitted Carbon Dioxide highest at first, related to United Kingdom and Sweden, but had descending trends at all which probably could be due to development of technology. Although the others remained stable at specific values over the last ten years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ld be due to development of technology. Although the others remained stable at specific ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, well, in contrast, such as, as well as, on the contrary, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07623318386 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60444322936 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668161434978 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4644699009 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 5.23603664747 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204911332677 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760083909886 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500484891514 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137614875871 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469462185511 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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