The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line chart elucidates fish and several different types of meat that consumed in an European country for 25 years period, from 1979 to 2004. Overall, the highest type of meat that consumed by European at the end of period was chicken. This was followed by beef, lamb, and fish.
In 1979, beef was the highest meat that consumed by an European country with almost 150 grams per individual per week. But, this did not last for long. The consumption of chicken has an abrupt rise and out taken the beef consumption in 1989. In addition to this, chicken reached its highest with 250 grams per person in one week and beef with its lowest point at over 100 grams per person in one week. Lamb which eaten by an European country decreased marginally to approximately 60 grams per person per week. This went as well as fish, which was fluctuated and fell slowly to less than half ounces per person each week.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55828220859 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23547035604 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3778781037 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172651788186 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084089283055 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802564861182 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16728104133 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730017300417 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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