The graph below shows the consumption three spreads from 1981 to 2007
The line graph illustrates the trend of consumption of spreads from 1981 to 2007covering Margarine, low fat and reduced spread and butter.
Overall, butter has always dominated the other two spreads till 1996, post which due to introduction of low fat and reduced spreads, butter was replaced. Consumption of Margarine was also dipped and subsequently was the lowest consumed spread among the three.
The consumption of butter which was just above 140 grams during 1981, touched its peak in the year 1986 of 160 grams, post which it declined and reached to its all time low between 40 grams to 60 grams in 2007. Margarine has been constant throughout the period ranging between 80 grams to 100 grams, however after 2001 is witnessed a sharp dip to 40 grams in 2007. Low fat and reduced spread was introduced in the year 1996, and immediately saw a spike in the 2001 with just over 8- grams. Although its consumption reduced for 2007, it was more than Margarine as well as butter.
To sum up, consumption of spreads has reduced overall and with the introduction of low fats and reduced spreads it is the butter and Margarine which are most affected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86432160804 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6011421057 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517587939698 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5589299614 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224603230416 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115627296773 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904539358856 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171456486049 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910428399421 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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