Given are two graphs, while the line chart compares the daily electricity demands between winter and summer in England, the pie chart shows the shares of electricity for 4 main purposes in an average English house.
It is clear that England's electricity demand is highest during winter. Additionally, the majority of electricity consumed in household is for heating puposes.
As regard to electricity demand, at midnight, while summer's electricity demand is at around 18,000 units, the demanding for electricity during winter is significantly higher, at 35,000 units. It is interesting to note that the electricity demands are high between 14 o'clock to 22 o'clock and low during 3 o'clock to morning. The highest point of England's electricity demand is around 22 o'clock during winter, at 43,000 units.
52,5% of electricity used in an English house is for heatings, including rooms heating and water heating, while ovens, kettles and washing machines only account for 17,5% of electricity usage. Meanwhile, the proportions of electricity consumed for lighting, TV, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools are equal, at 15% each.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...electricity demands are high between 14 oclock to 22 oclock and low during 3 oclock to...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...emands are high between 14 oclock to 22 oclock and low during 3 oclock to morning. The...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...14 oclock to 22 oclock and low during 3 oclock to morning. The highest point of Englan...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...nglands electricity demand is around 22 oclock during winter, at 43,000 units. 52,5...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43016759777 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83965991359 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2790649774 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45221808388 0.215688989381 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216009414642 0.103423049105 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109994792358 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298875234208 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909765393391 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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