The line graph provides information about the use of electric units during day and night in London in both seasons. There are various purposes it is used in the cold for households is illustrated by pie chart. The data in graph is calibrated into units.
Overall, it is crystal clear that the demand of electricity in England during typical days in winner was more than summer, while the most of electric unit was used for heating rooms and heating water in winter as compared to other home electricity items.
At the first glance, it can be clearly seen from graph that in UK, requirement of magnetic current in winter was registered the highest units that accounted more than 30, 000. It was followed by summer, having preposition of 20, 000. In cold, first 3 hours of the day need of electricity was recorded about 40, 000, (after) than in slight decline by 10, 000 in next 6 hours. Then it start increasing slowly which reach at peak by 50, 000. At the end, it record same as it was at starting of day. In summer, beginning hours with small decline and reach at 20, 000 by raising at 12. Then it more in zigzag in the last hours.
Moving further to chart, The more than 50% of heat is use for heating water and rooms. However, ovens, kettles use near 17% of electricity. Surprisingly, 15% was used by both lighting, television, radio and other electrical tools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'records'?
Suggestion: records
...each at peak by 50, 000. At the end, it record same as it was at starting of day. In s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58130081301 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45879856758 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0703557918 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259665776613 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828202526576 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863528780813 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192840887181 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101994241519 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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