The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the unemployed women rate in the category of four countries belonging to the UK in 2013 and 2014.
Overall, the number of unemployed women had a slight decrease in England, Wale, and North Ireland, while it increased in Scotland from 2013 to 2014.
In 2013, England had the highest number of women out of job with 6.8% but went down to 6.5% in 2014. While Scotland had the second greatest in the percentage of female unemployment over the UK in 2013 with a rate of 6.1%, then reached the 1st top country in the number of unemployed women by an increase of 0.6% in 2014.
The percentage of women without occupation in Wale was 5.4% in 2013 and fell to 5.5% in 2014. North Ireland had 5.6% of unemployed women in the population in 2013. The number delighted to 5% in the later year, then North Ireland had the smallest percent of unemployed women.
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 9n the three countries 67
- Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55063291139 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49746707128 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2845876381 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168435472415 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100483457853 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506874212153 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12761292246 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410716372175 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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