the graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the united kingdom in 2013 and 2014

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the graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the united kingdom in 2013 and 2014

The bar chart provides the percentage of unemployment rates of women in different countries that all in the UK between 2013 and 2014. Overall, it is can be seen that the figure for Scotland is the only one increased over this time whereas others all less the rate.

Looking at the data in more detail, we can see that England had the largest percentage in 2013, with the rate of 6.8%. However, it slightly decreased to 6.5% in 2014. In the same period, the proportion of unemployment rates in Scotland increased from 6.1% to 6.7% and it became the first place in 2014.

In 2013, 5.4% of women in Wales are unemployed which was the smallest figure compared with others and it still fell by 4% after a year late. Northern Ireland had noticeably changed between 2013 and 2014, the percentage stood at 5.6% and reached 4.6% which is the lowest unemployment rates in 2014.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, still, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65161290323 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46206600046 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6702760744 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255222813496 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123460622243 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697242906566 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179694025422 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00753277358859 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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