The graph below shows the information about medical care in three Europe countries between 1980 and 2000
The table gives information about the health care facilities in three European countries namely Austria, France and Sweden from 1980 to 2000. Overall, a cursory glance at the graph is enough to make it clear that the hospital beds per thousand showed an increase, whereas the average stay in healthcare centers decreased in given time.
In Austria, the number of doctors slightly experienced a development from 0.8 per 1000 people in 1980 to 1.0 per 1000 people. In meantime, the availability of physicians showed an opposite pattern in France from 2.4/1000 to 1.3/1000 during the given span. Sweden has the best healthcare between 1980 to 2000 in comparison with other areas, in spite of a slightly decrease in 1990 to 3.0/1000.
France saw the most marked growth in the number of hospital beds per thousand by 1.2/1000 during the aforementioned span. Austria showed a similar trend from 1.4 to 3.7 in the given period. With respect to Sweden, the nation took the lead by having 6.4 beds/1000 people in the years of 1980 and 1990, however, the later ten years, the figure reached at around 6.9 hospital beds per 1000 people.
Regarding the average span staying in health care centers, Sweden residents whose treatment days at hospitals were the highest compared to other countries with around 20 days on an average. Incredibly, both Austria and France saw a marked decrease in the days of hospitalization by 10 and 4 by 2000 in orderly.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...omparison with other areas, in spite of a slightly decrease in 1990 to 3.0/1000. France saw the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, so, whereas, in spite of, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95473251029 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63157703994 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6188086646 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.4 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169419103069 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748186646252 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844173197418 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114726422392 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868447408902 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...omparison with other areas, in spite of a slightly decrease in 1990 to 3.0/1000. France saw the m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, so, whereas, in spite of, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95473251029 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63157703994 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6188086646 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.4 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169419103069 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748186646252 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844173197418 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114726422392 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868447408902 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.