The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The given graph gives information about the proportion of visitors spending their vacation on a Caribbean is land, as well as where they stayed over the course 8 years starting in 2010.
Looking at the line graph, it is immediately obvious that while the number of tourists staying on cruise ships experienced an upward progression, that of those who staying on island underwent a marginal decrease before bouncing back to the previous status. However, these two figures added up to a high total, which witnessed a vigorous growth over the timespan.
In 2010, visitors residing on island stood at 0,75 million. In the next 4 years, this figure doubled and maintained its status quo 3 years in a row from 2013 to 2015. It was not until 2016 that the number declined moderately to 1,25 million and swiftly rose back to 1,5 million in 2017.
At the beginning of the period, the proportion of visitors staying on cruise ships was negligible at 0,25 million. Over the next 8 years, however, this figure experienced a sharp surge to an exact 2 millions, overtaking the number of travelers staying on island.
The progressive patterns for visitors on cruise ships and the island were reflected in the substantial gains for overall visitors, which started at 1 million in 2010, grew consistently to 2,75 in 2015 before plateauing through 2016 and ultimately peaked at 3,5 million by the end of the period.
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- Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people while others think it has the opposite effect Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
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- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89915966387 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67665197333 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7009772889 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.555555556 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144607482379 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610285233036 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477137790416 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081922846971 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251417974176 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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