The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The graph illustrates the volume of tourists, who had visited Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. The survey had made on the basis of visitors staying on cruise ships and island.
It is clearly shown in graph that tourists who want to stay on cruise ships is in upward trend and visitors who prefer staying on island is in downward trend. All over, the total number of tourist is in increasing trend. At the year 2010, visitors staying on cruise ship are 0.25 million, which is less then island. It increase in 2011 by 0.25 million. But in 2012 this trend goes on decreasing and again reach to near to 0.25 million as the year 2010. But after 2012, the trend of staying in cruise ship goes upward till 2017 without any fluctuation and reach at maximum point of around 2 million in 2017.
Secondly, at 2010 people love to stay on island with 0.75 million tourist which is very high than staying in cruise ship. In 2011, it remains constant and goes on increasing trend till 2013 and remains constant for next 2 years. After 2015, thereis slightly decrease in graph and 2017 it again goes upward at approximately 1.5 Million.
The total number of visitors starts with around 1 million in 2010 and going continuously in increasing trend except 2016 where it remains constant. In the year 2017, total number of tourist was about 3.5 million, which is highest point of total graph.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d. All over, the total number of tourist is in increasing trend. At the year 2010...
^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...se ship are 0.25 million, which is less then island. It increase in 2011 by 0.25 mil...
^^^^
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
... million, which is less then island. It increase in 2011 by 0.25 million. But in 2012 th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
...of tourist was about 3.5 million, which is highest point of total graph.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65714285714 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26633181412 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477551020408 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5058062618 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7692307692 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156035242856 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712743009635 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572884380754 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121847610708 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392891923863 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d. All over, the total number of tourist is in increasing trend. At the year 2010...
^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...se ship are 0.25 million, which is less then island. It increase in 2011 by 0.25 mil...
^^^^
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
... million, which is less then island. It increase in 2011 by 0.25 million. But in 2012 th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
...of tourist was about 3.5 million, which is highest point of total graph.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65714285714 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26633181412 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477551020408 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5058062618 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7692307692 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156035242856 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712743009635 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572884380754 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121847610708 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392891923863 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.