The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian exports to 4 countries
namely:Japan,US,China and India between 1990 and 2012
Overall, the proportion of import from Australian witnessed an upward trend in
China and India while that in Japan fall and US fluctuated throughout the year.
Another striking feature is that Japan was the country with highest percentage for
majority of period ,the figure for India was the lowest for each year
In 1990,around one-fourth of Australian export to Japan, compared to that of
US(11%).Two remain countries account a smaller share by 2% and 1%
respectively. Over the following 10 years, Japan experimented a slightly dropped
by 7 % while the opposite was true for China. Beside, exports to US fluctuated
between 8% and 11% whereas there was a stability until 2000 in India.
According to data, the proportion of exports to Japan continued gradual decrease
over the period, meanwhile, it is noticeable that by 2008,China supplanted Japan
to become country with the highest percentage of import from Australian.
Regarding US, the figure hit the lowest point in 2010 by 5% and recovered a little
bit to 6% in 2012.Throughout the period, despite a 5 time rise to roughly 5%,India
still ranked last among all country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , US
...ian exports to 4 countries namely:Japan,US,China and India between 1990 and 2012 ...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...g feature is that Japan was the country with highest percentage for majority of period ,the...
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Line 6, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ghest percentage for majority of period ,the figure for India was the lowest for ...
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Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Two
...rt to Japan, compared to that of US11%.Two remain countries account a smaller shar...
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Line 15, column 77, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...est point in 2010 by 5% and recovered a little bit to 6% in 2012.Throughout the period, de...
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Line 16, column 19, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Throughout
...d recovered a little bit to 6% in 2012.Throughout the period, despite a 5 time rise to ro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29901960784 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09302144797 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4433893424 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.166666667 112.824112599 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 3.83414634146 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249580544405 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114574578182 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918683299544 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827416066659 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995353666691 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.2329268293 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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