The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph gives information about the figure for Australian exportation in 4 countries, namely Japan, the US, China and India over a period of 22 years.

Overall, it can be seen from the graph that the proportion of exports to Japan and the US significantly dropped, whereas that of China and India increased considerably. In addition, the country which reached the highest percentage of exports at the end of the period was Japan.

In 1990, the percentage of exports to Japan and the US was 20% and 9% respectively. Besides, the proportion of exports to India was 1%, which was lower than that of China, at 2.5%. Over the next 5 years, the proportion of exports to both Japan and the US considerably decreased to 20% and 9% respectively. While exports to India remained stable at 1% and the figure for China had a slight rise of 3% in 1995.

In 2012, there was a gradual fluctuation in the percentage of exports to the US, which stood at 7% at the end of the period. At the same time, the figure for Japan steadily went down of 17%. By contrast, exports to Japan rapidly increased by 1% to 6%. But the most enormous change, however, was the percentage of exports to Japan which reached a peak of 30% in 2012.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an which reached a peak of 30% in 2012.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70097548953 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459090909091 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6747416122 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230828533335 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10343739082 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599963236392 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154291205642 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322611164126 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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