The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.

The given line graph gives statistics about the percentage of products imported from australia to four separated during the period from 1990 to 2012.
Overall, the figures for australian exports to china and india experienced a rising trend, especially that for exports to china increasing dramatically. Meanwhile, the rest countries saw an downward trend in the proportion of australian exports over the given period.

When it came to Japan, the percentage of exports of australia started at slightly over 25% at the beginning of the period, after which it dropped gradually and then reached nearly 16% in 2012.

The figure for australian products exported to USA fluctuated over 22 years. In 1990, it was observed at just over 10% before undergoing a oscillation in the remaining years. after that, it hit 5.5% in 2012.

it was clear that china experienced a dramatic change in the proportion of australian exports. The percentages of products imported from australia to both china and india were equal in 1990 (0.5%), at which point that to china increased repeatedly by 5% each year til it reached a peak of nearly over 29% in 2012 whereas india witnessed an unchanged period in the percentage of exports of australia within 10 years . after that stability, it started to grow slowly and hit a peak of 5.5 % before dropping by 0.5%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mported from australia to four separated during the period from 1990 to 2012. O...
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Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ally. Meanwhile, the rest countries saw an downward trend in the proportion of aus...
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Line 8, column 138, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rved at just over 10% before undergoing a oscillation in the remaining years. aft...
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Line 8, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...g a oscillation in the remaining years. after that, it hit 5.5% in 2012. it was...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
... after that, it hit 5.5% in 2012. it was clear that china experienced a dram...
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Line 11, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of exports of australia within 10 years . after that stability, it started to gro...
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Line 11, column 416, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: After
... exports of australia within 10 years . after that stability, it started to grow slow...
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Line 11, column 506, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d hit a peak of 5.5 % before dropping by 0.5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08520179372 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75954549845 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52466367713 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2636034216 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299778665069 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112285665499 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721127234044 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170872636284 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574659073867 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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