The line chart illustrates the changes in the proportion of individual in cities among four selected countries: the USA, Korea, China and India during a 60-year period.
It is clear that the USA always has the largest percentage of city population throughout the period shown. While the figure for Korea increases rapidly, the percentage of urban individual of China and India increase gradually.
In 1970, the largest proportion of American individual in cities was 70%, while the figure for Korea and China were about 40% and 20% respectively. And, the percentage of India was same as China. In the year 1990, the urban population of the USA rose to nearly 82%, and the number of Korea reached 70%. However, there was a slight increase of approximately 10% in India. In addition, the proportion in China remained stable during the period of 20 years.
By 2030, the percentage of population in cities of the USA and Korea are expected to peak at almost 90%. As same as the trend saw in the USA and Korea, the proportion in China is predicted to grow to nearly 65%. The number of India will possibly to rise slowly and is predicted to about 38%.
- The graph below shows the percentage of population in cities since 1970s with projection to 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant 54
- the pie charts show the expenditures of a school in the UK in 1981, 1991 and 2001. 73
- Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc to serve society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 88
- The table below shows the amount of waste production in millions of tonnes in six different countries over a twenty year period 87
- The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.785 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61414900111 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8258616046 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0885955363309 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420286053103 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048709346214 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664068327994 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207808263299 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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