The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and
predicted population growth up until 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevan
The graph demonstrates how many people in two different countries from 2000 to 2020 and with projected values till 2050.
Overall, it is clear that the population of India witnesses an upward trend, while the fluctuation is revelaed in China's inhabitants throughout the period given. Although India initially has lower people, it has outraced China since 2030 as the forecast stastistics.
To begin with, there were about 1.3 billion humans living in China in 2000, being higher than that in India by approximately 0.3 billion. Then, the figure for China rose gradually to 1.35 billion in 2010 and continued to remain this positive change in the following 20 years, standing at around 1.45 unit in 2030. Surprisly, a contrary pattern will be seen between 2030 and 2050; Therefore, after reaching a peak , China's population will slightly decrease to 1.4 billion at the end of the period.
Focusing on the number of people in India , it began at exactly 1 billion people and steadily grew during all of the succeeding period. As a result, the year 2030 will mark the intersection of two lines in the graph so 1.45 billion dwellers will be seen in both nations at this point. However, India's population will keep its growth momentum to surpass China as the estimated number that will be above 1.5 biliion and 1.6 billion in 2040 and in 2050 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: remained
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90829694323 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60790804777 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633187772926 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8413965911 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.888888889 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176971973803 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772146658438 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318348075964 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108548787262 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221831946496 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.