The graph below shows the proportion of population aged 65 and above between 1940 to 2040.
Summarise the information below by making comparison when necessary. Write not less than 150 words
CORRECTED VERSION
The line graph depicts the percentage of people aged 65 years and above in the USA, Sweden and Japan between 1940 and 2040.
Overall, there was an increase in the population over the period being reviewed in all the countries, though with some fluctuations.
In the year 1940, the population of this age-group in the USA and Sweden stood at nearly 10 per cent and just above 5 per cent respectively. Over, the next four decades, that of the USA rose steadily by approximately 5 per cent while that of Sweden almost doubled. However, while the former witnessed a fairly stable trend from 1980 to 2020 and is predicted to peak by 2040 at about 25%, the latter staggered upwards and is expected to stand at one-fourths by the end of the period under review.
Furthermore, Japan’s population of those 65 years and above kicked off at 5%. It decreased slightly below this value and plateaued on this latter value for the next six decades. It then began to rise in the year 2000, and will gradually reach 10% after 2020 and is forecasted to finish the period above 25%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecasted to finish the period above 25%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.734375 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52770563752 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5203263475 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149066577435 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662963511001 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635482439519 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10235795493 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751466757305 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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