Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.
To what extent do you agree?
Majority of the people are of the opinion that broadcasting celebrities influences the young ones negatively. I strongly agree that broadcasting famous people have harmful effects on the underage because it exposes them to inappropriate lifestyle, it also affects their academic performance adversely.
To begin, broadcasting celebrities exposes children to inappropriate lifestyle. It is an absolute fact that the artist sometimes display implausible and debase way of life on the television, radio and the internet in order to become more famous and to gain more followers. This preposterous manner of life could be exhibited through immorality, drug abuse and materialistic pursuits. Admittedly, a great deal of youths keep up with the programs that feature these celebrities thus imitating their way of life, consequently, mental disorders from substance abuse ensued. For example, a research conducted by a federal neuropsychiatry hospital in west Africa estimated that in 2015, children who suffered from substance abuse admitted that they first learnt such habit from their favourite artist.
Furthermore, media coverage of celebrities affect the academic performance of children. It is crucial to note that most pupils and students assign more time for famous people's news while others follow their instagram pages and websites for latest updates,
as a result, they abandon their curricular activities. For example, a research carried out by one educational institution in New York revealed that student and pupils who performed below average in their assessment test and examination were fans of popular celebrities in the world.
To conclude, it is a fact that most people agree that broadcasting famous artist have negative influence on children, however, I affirm that the above stated assertion is true because it exposes children to absurd way of life and affect their academic performance negatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63793103448 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0466468576 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.375439099 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.636363636 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169813390106 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758635330029 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723533887663 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105702262674 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583398833869 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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