The graph below shows the proportion ò the population aged 65 and over between 190 and 2040 in three different countries
The given line graph shows data the percentages of old people aged 65 and over from 19040 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden and The USA.
General speaking, there are increasing trends in all three contries over the period of 10 decades
Let me begin by decribing the period from 1940 to 1980, the first result worth pointing out is that there were gradual decrease by 6% in the proporting of elder people in both The USA and Sweden. Another trend that can be observed is that this percentage of Japan declined slowly by approximately 1% in the first 20 years, then maintained unchanged in the next 20 years
Turning to the rest of the given period, mosting noticeably of all, it can be seen that this proporting of Japan jumps sharply, which will be made Japan become the oldest country of all and touch peak at about 27% in 2040. Meanwhile, there is fluctual percetage of Sweden people aged 65 and over in range 14-25%. As for elder population in The USA, it shows that went down slightly in the two-thirds of this period, then A similar trend with Japan will be predicted to hit the top at just under a quarters of percentage in 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 496, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a quarter' or simply 'quarters'?
Suggestion: a quarter; quarters
... predicted to hit the top at just under a quarters of percentage in 2040.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, third, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37215779898 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.842031455 43.030603864 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.4 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.2 22.9334400587 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193688499298 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118500173152 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690306657155 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126682728784 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825027389747 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.7 10.3012195122 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.71 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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