The line graph below illustrates the percentage of the elderly aged 65 and over in the period of time from 1940 to 2040 in three different countries: Japan, Sweden and the USA. It is clear that Japan is predicted to rise to the top in regard of population aged 65 while the USA is the country having the least old people.
Looking closely at the graph, in 1940, the USA had the most population above 65 with a proportion of nearly 10% and Japan was in the last spot with only 5%. However, after a half of a decade, the USA's percentage of the old fluctuated and started to drop to the number of less than 15%. At the same time, the proportion of Sweden's elderly rise to 15%, became the country with the largest percentage. Japan was still having the least old people with less than 5%.
In 2040, it is forecasted that Japan's percentage will rocket to over 25% after having the smallest percentage for a decade and Japan will have the oldest population. Following will Sweden with the number of a quarter and the USA is predicted to become a country with less people aged above.
To conclude, in the past, the USA took first place of having the most elderly and Japan had the least, however, after a decade, it is predicted that the spot will be switched.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below illustrates the percentage of the...
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Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... of the elderly aged 65 and over in the period of time from 1940 to 2040 in three different co...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...A is predicted to become a country with less people aged above. To conclude, in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44396551724 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33166548667 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452586206897 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3996124009 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.555555556 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152678050074 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07457453163 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785745491792 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103179347022 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889354399968 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.