The line graph illustrates the percentage of citizens aged 65 and over in three different countries over 100 years period.
It is easily to realize that there are 3 main countries in this research including USA, Sweden and Japan. Beside, All these countries are in upward trend in whole period, especially Japan is estimated on the top in 2040.
Firstly, USA is described as a country which was quite stable from the beginning (about 10% in 20-first-year). But, after that, it increased almost 5% by 1980. Despite of slightly decreasing, by the years 2040, it will acheive almost over 22%.
Secondly, overal, Sweden's population in on upward trend also. And, it will get second position in 2040 (25%-to be precise) about old aged citizens when comparing with others.
Finally, the population of Japan decreased approximately a half from the start to the year 1986. By contrast, in the next 38 years, the proportion has risen and will get 10% in 2024. From 2024 to 2040, it increases dramatically which is predicted that will be the highest percentage among three countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
..., Swedens population in on upward trend also. And, it will get second position in 20...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00555555556 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69747824623 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1901945651 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.9090909091 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143685122064 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515197195057 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537457218619 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847432968237 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062203947359 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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