The graph below illustrates the percentages of over 65 years old people in Japan, Sweden and USA over the period of 100 years starting from 1940.
Overall, the proportions of elders aged 65 over in three mentioned countries are expected to increase through the surveyed period. The last 20 years from 2020 to 2040 is the time when the amounts of over 65 years old people are predicted to be rose dramatically.
Looking at the details, from the period of 40 years starting from 1940, the percentages of old people aged 65 over in Japan decreased marginally from 5% to approximately 4%. However, there are considerable growths in proportions of over 65 years old people in Sweden and USA (from above 5% to just under 15% and from around 10% to 15% respectively). In the next 2 years, these amounts in Sweden rose sharply, the percentages in the USA drop insignificantly to just more than 14% and the proportions of over 65 years old Japanese went up slightly and reached 5% again in 2000.
More specifically, the amounts of the population aged 65 over in the USA are predicted to be remained constantly until 2020 and then shoot up to just below 25% in 2040. The proportions of over 65 years old elders in Sweden are expected to be increased and reach approximately 25% in the last surveyed year. In addition, in the period from 2020 to before 2040, the percentages of the Japanese aged 65 over are guessed to be rocketed by 15% and then reach the peak of around 27% in the year 2040.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 33.7804878049 210% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62406015038 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73494108975 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402255639098 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.3589955088 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267075283701 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144037733046 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532550272823 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199959677424 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375671223587 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.