The graph below shows the satisfaction rating of the staff in four colleges from 1991 to 2002
The line chart depicts the proportions of satisfied employees in four tertiary institutions in the
period of 1991-2002. Overall, the main characteristic of the graph is the considerable fluctuations
in the figures.
The most evident feature of the chart is the change in the rank of the contentment percentage in
College C. Dwindling from the lowest of the graph at just under 30 per cent to 10 per cent in 1998,
this figure then rocketed, outstripping the numbers for the other colleges in 1999 prior to slowly
peaking at 80 per cent in the last three years.
Another outstanding point is the convergence and divergence between the satisfaction rates in
College A and College B, as they varied in opposite directions around 70 per cent and 55 per cent,
respectively, remaining as the two highest numbers in the first seven years before the latter
surpassed the former. The number for College A finally dropped to 40 per cent while the other rose
slowly to 70 per cent.
A final feature to note is the stability in staff satisfaction rate of College D, which ranked third
around 40 per cent for most of the given period before it halved to the lowest position in the last
three years.
- Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.Do you agree or disagree? 84
- The graph below shows the satisfaction rating of the staff in four colleges from 1991 to 2002 73
- The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of films in the USA in 2010 52
- The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Today people are living longer, so they should work longer. Do you agree or disagree? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84541062802 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77376311439 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6145336306 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.285714286 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192826552908 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888418495859 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041050719565 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662924737372 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715450785158 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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