The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

The line graph compares two different countries namely the US and Japan in terms of their unemployment rate over the period of 6 years.

It is noticeable that the unemployment rate in the US saw a dramatic decrease over the period shown. By contrast, the figure for Japan rose significantly in each year.

In March 1993, the percentage of unemployment in the US accounted for the highest, at 7.0 percent. Meanwhile, the proportion for those who were jobless in Japan made up the lowest rate over the same period, which was below 2.5 percent. Although the two trends in both nations were completely different, the unemployment of the US in most years was higher than that of Japan.

Between 1993 and 1995, the unemployment rate of the US fell rapidly to approximately 5.4 percent. Unlike that of America, the rate in Japan saw a small rise during the same period, to above 3.0 percent by the year 1995. From 1995 to 1999, the figure of both countries fluctuated, but the portion varied more significantly in the US than they did in Japan. Just over the following year, the figure for jobless people in Japan overtook that in America and reached the highest point of the whole graph, around 4.7 percent while the rate in the US dropped to its lowest point by 4.1 percent.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71875 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61565620181 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522321428571 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6606528993 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.7 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351347852293 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146275181572 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740766361427 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209408359901 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417064149471 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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