The graph illustrates the capacity of passenger activity during weekdays on the Toronto Metro system in July, 2007.
Overall, it is obvious that the majority of activities in Toronto Metro occurs between 6:00 in the morning and 10:00 in the evening.
As it is presented in the diagrams, after 6 a.m. the number of activities is shown to have experienced a dramatic increase within two hours and reached its peak at 8 a.m., recorded with approximately 400 thousand people. Through three periods of significant downfall during the day creating three valleys. The lowest point was right before 4 p.m. with 100 thousand people as shown. The data then rose steadily to meet its second peak during the late afternoon rush hour.
Furthermore, there is a modest rise from 10:00 to 12:00 a.m. followed by a stable period. A small peak after 8 p.m.. can also be observed.
- It has been observed that in many countries there are not enough students choosing to study science subjects at university. What do you think are causes of the problem? Are there any effects on society? 56
- The charts show the main methods of transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009 Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 66
- The charts below show the percentage of water used by different sectors in Sydney, Australia, in 1997 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 84
- The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature. and make comparison where relevant. 73
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK university in 1987 and in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2007'.
Suggestion: July 2007
...weekdays on the Toronto Metro system in July, 2007. Overall, it is obvious that the maj...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...iod after that. A small peak after 8 p.m.. can also be observed.
^^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Can
... after that. A small peak after 8 p.m.. can also be observed.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90540540541 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57250591945 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689189189189 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9856683601 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104381123818 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428641989107 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863497195906 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939759081087 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109510191115 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.