The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an England town in 2012

Essay topics:

The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an England town in 2012.

The graph represents how many children with gender difference, playing six kinds of sports (Tennis, badminton, cycling, swimming, football and hockey) in town in England in 2012.
Overall, more boys participated in playing sports than girls, especially in football, while majority girls preferred to play swimming. Both males and females least preferred to play hockey.
It is apparent that, there are four types of sports which played majorly by boys. To start with, about 60 boys played football, whereas only 20 girls played. Tennis and cycling had the same scenario which played by 50 and about 35 boys respectively compared to around 38 and 20 girls. In terms of hockey, which was the minimal number of boys played (of 15) than that of girls.
On the other hand, more girls played in rest of sports which showed only 10 girls difference in playing; swimming had 50 girls while badminton played by 40 girls.

Votes
Average: 5 (6 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2018-08-02 VuXuan 78 view
2016-09-26 Monica1 50 view
Essays by user Monica1 :

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'whereas', 'while', 'to start with', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.291428571429 0.268076937826 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.125714285714 0.116061578633 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0457142857143 0.0759168565197 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0342857142857 0.0366838410393 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00571428571429 0.0131127313244 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.171428571429 0.155750635184 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0514285714286 0.0379272487307 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42251884367 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0228571428571 0.0210936926555 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0342857142857 0.0948980150116 36% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0285714285714 0.00967000014798 295% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 909.0 1161.00487805 78% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.9 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94117647059 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366013071895 0.337110787985 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235294117647 0.247514529752 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156862745098 0.171178102325 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0915032679739 0.112407865282 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42251884367 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.546246751206 115% => OK
Word variations: 56.7708552438 49.3433353143 115% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 19.125 23.0094962315 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2302983254 42.9750493124 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 135.714022679 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 23.0094962315 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 42.6544117647 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 3.10344827586 2.94281807926 105% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432958634742 0.418131533498 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.165998717588 0.181151798455 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0942971006161 0.0850326197045 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.696023648192 0.706616315825 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198516997764 0.157042692854 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195905191049 0.228904883108 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128534785333 0.108899403657 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.251317265688 0.367819155151 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0742180479092 0.0812612215331 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285366612904 0.316326947829 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806879711782 0.0921553760075 88% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70731707317 216% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 3.16585365854 253% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.