The graph shows the percentage of males and females academic staff members across the faculties of a major university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavant.
The graph depicts the proportion of staff members between men and women across 7 different departments of a major university in 2012.
Overall, engineering has the top percentage amoung men(around 82%) and education amoung women (around 78%). However, education is the least amount(approximately 21%) of staff
member in males and among females it's engineering(almost 18%).
Firstly, the Engineering staff percentage of men is much higher when compared to women which is approximately 82% and 18% respectively. law staff percentage is 60% for men and
40% for women. The academic staff percentage in science for men is around 61% and for women is around 38. When looking at business staff percentage we are able to see that it is almost 62% for men
and almost 38% for women.
From the bar chart we are able to see that women population is much more in particular fields like Arts, Education, and Medicine. In education, women are a peaking 78% whereas men at just above 20%.
However, there is a slight decrease in the percentage for women in arts at 58% whereas males are at just above 40%. Academic staff percentage in terms of medicine is quite equal with women at 50% and men just below 50%.
In terms of arts women is leading men with around 10% wheras men are just above 40%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Law
...approximately 82% and 18% respectively. law staff percentage is 60% for men and 4...
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Line 6, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... law staff percentage is 60% for men and 40% for women. The academic staff percen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, whereas, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83257918552 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82942591173 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488687782805 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8141704587 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135115647215 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651677411573 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586136207224 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737872697838 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673383097878 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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