The bar chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the proportion of Australian obesity of two genders (male and female) over a 31-year period, starting from 1980.
A closer look at the diagram highlights the fact that this phenomenon favored men over women and was increasingly expanded throughout the same period, with a notable exception of male in 2010.
More specifically, the percentage of obese Australian women gradually increased with a difference of 10% every ten years and reached the highest point at 50% in 2000 which was slightly less than that of their counterparts in 1990. Furthermore, this figure also saw no variation for overweight female in 2010. On the other hand, the opposite sex, started at approximately 47% rising dramatically and reached its peak in 2000 with a figure of 70%, but then experienced a slight fall of 2% which was 20% higher than that of the former gender in the last ten years.
- The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing What are the reasons What are the impacts 89
- The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full time and part time students about its services 78
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to the remote natural environment such as South pole Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Nowadays some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using the computer Do you agree or disagree 89
- The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92405063291 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79572085863 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7433947026 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.6 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 5.23603664747 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118823189292 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641649874557 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423088911572 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751794019875 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306252011364 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.