The graph shows ths demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. Tbe pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The first diagram of line graph represents information about energy consumed throughout typical days in winter and summer in England. The second diagram of cyclic chart depicts the usage of electricity in average english home. The data is calibrated in percentage and it is clear and coherent representation.
From the lower line of graph, it can be seen that in summers nearly about 18,000 units of electricity is consumed in initial hours of day. In addition to this, consumption of energy attains its peak level between 12-15 hours. At the end of the day the electricity demand comes to 18,000 again in England. Whereas, upper line of graph shows that in winters the highest consumption of electrical units before the end of day is 49,000 and lowest value of eletricity demand is 30,000 between 6 and 9 hours. At the end of day energy consumption is same as it was in the start of day.
On the other hand, pie chart shows that most of the electricity is used in heating rooms and water. Moreover; ovens, kettles and washing machines uses 17.5 percent. Whereas, lighting, television radio consumes 15 percent and vacuum cleaner, food mixer, electric tools also consumes 15 percent.
Overall, it is evident from line graph that most of the electricity consumed in typical days in England is in winters. where the key reasons are heating rooms and heating water as presented by the cyclic chart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of electricity in average english home. The data is calibrated in percentage and it...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ity is used in heating rooms and water. Moreover; ovens, kettles and washing machines us...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
... typical days in England is in winters. where the key reasons are heating rooms and h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, so, whereas, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90336134454 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60562815309 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533613445378 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7138769722 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7692307692 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34659354707 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119282082418 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089765589688 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198175384362 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393166479673 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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