graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.

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graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

As we can see, the above line graph illustrates the average usage of subway trains by Peoples in London on a 1-hour basis. It can be measured in numbers.
In general, we can see there is a gradual incline in usage of trains from early morning, however: there is decline in peak hours between 14 pm to 16pm. Finally, there is constant rose about 100 passengers in 17 hour.
Beginning with, from 7 am to 8 am there is an increasing value of 200 passengers in 1 hour, however: there is dramatic decline after 2 hours. After 5 hours, there is incremental value of 200 passengers in peak hours. Finally, after 2 hours (20 o clock) there is fluctuation in 21 and 22 hour.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...onstant rose about 100 passengers in 17 hour. Beginning with, from 7 am to 8 am the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...clock there is fluctuation in 21 and 22 hour.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 544.0 965.302439024 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38709677419 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58683732912 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 162.0 283.868780488 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5377870752 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7142857143 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0433264556674 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219023820122 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208507130129 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0314637560339 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115943168485 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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