More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
More and more people are having children in later life than early age because of change in trend. Although it gives time for one’s to build their economy background as well as gives freedom, it has demerits people might change their mindset due to the external influence. In my opinion, the benefit that people gain of having children very lately in life outweighs the disadvantages.
Firstly, individuals will have time to support their household. To be more precise, if people (or) a newly married couple decided to have a child they need to be ready to raise the baby in a very comfortable zone. For example, parents should have at least some adequate amount of money to support child’s daily life, education. Another reason is they will have some time to spend to travel various places. In addition, if one of the individual wanted to purse higher education can get external support from one of the household member. Therefore, by recording above reasons and examples postpone of having a baby is beneficial.
Secondly, there is a slight possibility that parents might change their thought of having infants at early age due to some reasons. First reason, government might introduce policies like no child get benefits because of overpopulation. Second reason, parents might focus too much in the carrier and forgetting about having a toddler. Last one is infertility. For instance, a recent study shows that in India more than 30% of female populace has lost their ability of reproduction. These are some disadvantages.
To sum up, general population is changing their way of having a baby in early age to future life. Even though it gives autonomy plus giving a chance of saving huge sum of money, people might forget about having a child. I personally believe that pluses overshadow drawbacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70412302261 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3359499912 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234635004289 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702810498088 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517014929178 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146449633434 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485748603436 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.