More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In the present age, a new trend is clearly seen in couples having children as they choose the later part of their age to do so than what was seen in the past. Such a decision has its own merits and demerits. This essay will discuss both the scenarios in a brief.
A clear advantage for couples in taking this step is that they can focus more on their careers and provide a stable platform for their children growing up. For example, a newly married young couple is new to their jobs too, they have to manage their workload with their personal life. They need to save money for their future, a proper home is the most important requirement for them. If they have a baby during this period it raises many issues in the household which can cause stress for the new parents. Therefore, if they feel comfortable to have children at a later age then it would certainly help them in raising their child in a stress-free environment and they could focus more on them.
But this trend has its disadvantages too as parents who get above a certain age may face some medical problems in having babies. Infertility is one of the most common and serious problems of our time which has a clear relation to age, stress and lifestyle. Another problem that can be seen is genetic abnormalities in the baby, chances of which increase if the mother is over 35 years of age. Thus, such parents develop serious concerns regarding the same and this may lead to depression and other problems at their workplace or homes.
To conclude, having a child at a later age is very common nowadays since people get more experienced and capable by then but with the effects of age also on them. So, in my opinion an earlier age is much more preferred than a later age, when the parents and their offspring are at equal risk.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51070336391 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3639836047 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2010533096 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.357142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245814655334 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869865181033 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501777631647 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153381289736 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410262156079 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.