There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.

What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?

Submitted by dnaman11 on Fri, 08/09/2019 - 18:43

In the present world we are facing a major issue in the form of global warming, occurring largely as a result of human activities. There are innumerable causes of the same. This essay will discuss some of these important causes and how to tackle them.

Firstly, an important cause of rising global temperatures is the continuous and increasing use of fossil fuels. For instance, more and more number of vehicles are flooding the roads these days. With an improvement in economic conditions and easy accessibility owning a car is quite common in the modern world. To tackle this problem government agencies need to have a law limiting the sale of vehicles and their presence on the road. Moreover, the use of public transport must be practiced. People need to be made aware of the available facilities and how they would help them.

Another factor causing global warming is the use of refrigerant gases like Freons. These are halogenated gases which stay in the atmosphere for considerably longer periods of time and are also responsible for the depletion of Ozone layer in our atmosphere. The use of Air conditioners has increased drastically in the past century, owing to more gases being released into the air causing further rise in temperatures. This is a vicious cycle. Individuals and governments must realize that this is a serious concern and act accordingly. Governments should look at a replacement of these gases and ban and replace the older machines running on them. Individuals need to make an effort on their own at their homes and cars to control the use of air conditioners. For example, setting the temperature at 24-26 degree Celsius is not only comfortable enough but also limits the use of gases for a continuous period.

All in all, it can be said that the rising surface temperatures on Earth are directly or indirectly linked to man-made activities. Every country and every individual needs to step up to curtail this problem or future generations will face the consequences of our doings.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98520710059 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85971042231 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3505481439 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6842105263 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224167728884 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614723059689 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526437241466 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137153204254 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402380383089 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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