The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

This graph depict the number passenger numbers in underground station in London from 6am to 10pm.This line of graph above illustrates the highest number of people who travel between 8am and 6pm.
At 6am,around 100 people can be found in the station and it increases sharply until 8am when the numbers peak at 400.After 8am the passengers decrease steadily .This numbers fluctuate till 4pm.Then it starts up trend and reaches a peak of around 380.The period from 6pm till 10 pm,the number decline dramatically and downward trend.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'depicts'.
Suggestion: depicts
This graph depict the number passenger numbers in undergr...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ound station in London from 6am to 10pm.This line of graph above illustrates the hig...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
... until 8am when the numbers peak at 400.After 8am the passengers decrease steadily .T...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... until 8am when the numbers peak at 400.After 8am the passengers decrease steadily .T...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ter 8am the passengers decrease steadily .This numbers fluctuate till 4pm.Then it ...
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Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...r 8am the passengers decrease steadily .This numbers fluctuate till 4pm.Then it star...
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Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...eadily .This numbers fluctuate till 4pm.Then it starts up trend and reaches a peak o...
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Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... trend and reaches a peak of around 380.The period from 6pm till 10 pm,the number d...
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Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...round 380.The period from 6pm till 10 pm,the number decline dramatically and downwar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 445.0 965.302439024 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 87.0 196.424390244 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11494252874 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.05407580998 3.73543355544 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54519201203 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 62.0 106.607317073 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712643678161 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 119.7 283.868780488 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 222.5 112.824112599 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.5 22.9334400587 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166400940903 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144397101702 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481844512954 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144397101702 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481844512954 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.2329268293 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 22.5 11.4329268293 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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