The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph provides the information about the number of passenger in london at underground station form 6:00 am to 10:pm in one hour interval. Overall the number of passenger is varied through out the given time period, the graph follows the zig-zag pattern.

The maximum number of passenger is 400 at morning 8:00 am. In contrast the minimum number of passenger is 100 for two different timing 6:00 am and 4:00 pm. In the morning hours the graph increases from 6:00 to 8:00 am and reaches its maximum after that its starts decreasing upto 10:00am. In between the day time 10:00 am to 4:00 pm the number of passengers is below 300 and is non uniform. After 4:00 again graph increases and reaches to second highest at 6:00 pm and after that it starts decreasing upto 8:pm. For the last two hours again the graph increases and decreases for a slight range.

In conclusion, the number of passenger at underground station in london is in the morning and evening time. In the afternoon, the station is lightly crowded.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...erall the number of passenger is varied through out the given time period, the graph follow...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...passenger is 400 at morning 8:00 am. In contrast the minimum number of passenger is 100 ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hat its starts decreasing upto 10:00am. In between the day time 10:00 am to 4:00 p...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, in conclusion, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74719101124 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47089483747 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466292134831 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4339585707 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178973865612 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987380059889 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785848900809 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185586712251 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776305631913 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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