The graphs below give information about commuting inside and outside London in 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
travel time method of travel
The Graph illustrates the time taken by employees for traveling to their workplace, and the modes of transport used by these people. This data is comparing London to rest of the UK.
Overall, this can be seen that most of the people reach their offices in a maximum of a quarter of minutes in states other than London while London's employees themselves takes around half- hour to reach. And surprisingly, whole UK is making an extensive use of cars as their way to commute.
Around 45% of workers take just 1 to 15 minutes to reach office and the percentage is decreasing abruptly on addition of an extra 15 minutes every time. There are approximately 2% of people who takes more than an hour to reach, allover UK except London. However, The trend in different for London here. As, Only about 19% of workers reach office in about 15 minutes which is much less in comparison to Rest of the UK. For Employees taking quarter to half an hour to reach in London and outside London is just having a little difference of about 4%. There are some of the workers in London who takes time of half an hour to an hour to reach office whereas for other parts of UK the number is decrementing. For people taking more than an hour the London people are succeeding other by more than 10%.
Regarding the mode of transport, Cars are dominating every other mode both inside and outside London. Workers somewhat prefer using Buses over Walking in London and Vice-Versa for rest of the UK. Usage of Bicycles is approximately negligible for whole United Kingdom. Though Trains and some underground modes are being used by London people reaching around 20% while both of these means of transport are nearly trivial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 560, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ittle difference of about 4%. There are some of the workers in London who takes time of hal...
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Line 13, column 376, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this means' or 'these means'?
Suggestion: this means; these means
...eople reaching around 20% while both of these means of transport are nearly trivial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 300.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71666666667 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47480414489 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 283.868780488 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2738281347 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107071862933 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454427124461 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315916853493 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761926553361 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279539933217 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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