The graphs below provide information about the sales in England of three different kinds of music. The graphs together cover five decades and the sales are measured in pounds sterling. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph reveals the three various types of music sales in England from 2000 to 2003 while the line graph represent the deals are constant in pounds sterling between 1960's and 1990's.
It is vivid from the illustration that in case of pop music, it is interesting facts that the highest sales in every year that is 4.3 pounds in billions in 2000. Then it was increased to 5 pounds in 2001. After that it decreased to 3.3 pounds in the year of 2002 and in 2003 it was increased to approximately 5 pounds. Apart from this, the second highest sales was rock music that is nearly 3 pounds in 2000 then it increased to 4 pounds 2001. After this, it was decreased to the next 2 years whereas the least sales of classical music
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, then, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 592.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35294117647 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31961695919 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 157.5 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8318505103 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194622961267 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100343858535 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618887077144 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172679875238 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459839469693 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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