The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.

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The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.

The line graph compares the number of world population growth from 1800 to 2100, and the bar chart illustrates urban population in two different regions between 2015 and 2040.

It is clear that urban population in developing regions is expected to increase considerably. Additionally, we can predict that global population will see a fluctuation in the future.

According to the line graph, the world population was around 1000 million people in the year 1800. After that, the rate of the population growth went up slightly and reached approximately 2000 million people in 1920. From 1940 to 2040, it has experienced a dramatic rise and is expected to reach the highest point of 8000 million people in 2040. However, there will be a sharp fall in the last 60 years, and global population will reach just above 6000 million people in 2100.

Looking at urban population bar chart, we can see that urban population in developed regions will remain stable from 1000 million people in 2015 to 1300 million in 2040. By contrast, predictions show that this figure in developing regions will grow considerably and reach 4000 million in 2040.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68737237271 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529100529101 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0325487839 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252258948858 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117720963117 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668546215359 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178754850226 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045963152806 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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