The graphs below show the annual expenditure of university students in three countries in 2003.
The pie charts demonstrate the percentage of university students’ cost in different items in 3 typical countries in 2003.
As we can seen, food and accommodation constitute the biggest proportion of the total. More precisely, accommodation dominate the first place in the courtry A, standing in the marked contrast with food(45% versus 22%), while similar pattern can be seen in country B. Adversely, food comprised largest proportion of money unniversity students spent a year, exceeding accommodation by 4%.
Moreover, the remainder was divided among leisure, books and others. To be more specific, leisure and food share the same proportion of total in country A, where the books was the least. Additionally, university students in country A cost more money on leisure, with only 18% of other two items collectively, whereas books constituted 21% of the total, clearly outnumbering the other two parts.
Overall, university students spended more on food and accommodation in all three countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
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Suggestion: comprised the largest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53548387097 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15235075722 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.938700197 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170097050425 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777622191108 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752065439411 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131433665511 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682203857713 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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