The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first map illustrates what a university’s sports center is like currently and the second describes the projection for its look in the future.

It is clear that there is an entrance in the north of the building, with a reception siting on the north of the entrance. On the left of the reception, there is a changing room, connected to a 25-meter pool lying in the central area of the construction. Furthermore, a gym and the area for seating is on the north and west of the pool respectively, while at the west and east of the center are two outdoor courts of the same size.

Moving on to the second diagram, we can see that there will be some striking changes, except the reception, the pool, the changing room as well as the seating. Specifically, A sports shop and a cafe are planned to be set up at both sides of the entrance. Another remarkable difference is the establishment of two new changing rooms, which will lie in the south-eastern and south-western corners. It should be noted that the western outdoor courts are designed to give way to a leisure pool. Plus, the gym will be enlarged to twice of its former size. Apart from that, the eastern sports courts will be demolished to make room for a sports hall, to the east of which are predicted to be two dancing studio.

Overall, facilities will be improved to become more various and comprehensive, which are more likely to attract citizens to visit and exercise there.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The first map illustrates what a university's sports center is like...
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Line 7, column 633, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...s will be demolished to make room for a sports hall, to the east of which are predicte...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 699, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'studio' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'studios'.
Suggestion: studios
...f which are predicted to be two dancing studio. Overall, facilities will be improve...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, well, while, apart from, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65758754864 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83798196297 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509727626459 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1774592405 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.818181818 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.089788647016 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034163858579 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368988328449 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544338178806 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443743617223 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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