The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar graphs below depict the amount of buying the various song albums: Pop music, Rock music and classical music by the folks of the UK. Graphs show the data in order to Male, female and different age groups.
Overall, the percentage of male who buys all types of music holds the highest compared to the female. In between the ages, Pop and Rock music looks both had similar trends where Classical music who buys the old age people.
On the one hand, male sex buys both rock and pop music with around 28% where female buys with 19% around. In terms of age, between 25 to 35 age group people buy both rock and pop music around 32% and it is the highest among all the types. People aged 45+ had the lowest percentage with around 7%. Remaining the other two age groups had the same percentage in rock and pop music (31% and 24% respectively).
On the other hand, the highest percentage of people who buy classical music is 45+ with around 20% and the lowest percentage almost 2% for the 16-24 age group people. Men and women buy around 9% and 6%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46666666667 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01529979596 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476923076923 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6504980047 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167675090953 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806816633042 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041518895304 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120970061033 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489698960786 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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