The two line graphs given depict the changes in trends in urban and rural populations as well as in different age groups from 1950 to 2020 and provide predictions for the year 2040.
It is clear that the population proportion in these two areas appears to have continued to increase during the year surveyed. Furthermore, the proportion of people aged 15 to 65 is the highest among other age groups.
When it comes to urban and rural population trends, the total number is up from 11% in 1950 and is expected to reach 43% by 2040. Meanwhile, the population living in rural areas is not compared to the city at a rate of about 4% to 6% in the first 70 years. This number may have increased by 1% over the year.
Regarding the age structure trend, the proportion of people aged 15 to 65 increased continuously from 7% to 33% in the first 70 years, however, in 2040 it seems that a milder accumulation will be recorded at 35 %. It is noted that the 5% increase in the proportion of people under 15 years of age is inversely proportional to the 2% decrease in people over 65 years of age in 1960 despite sharing a similar starting point of 3%. The opposite part has been observed over the next 10 years as they surpass approximately 8% and are also predicted to grow up 6% in 2040.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...number may have increased by 1% over the year. Regarding the age structure trend...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40084388186 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60626496098 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8544279243 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348140610293 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143385867419 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168016642102 0.0843802449381 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248896440735 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190716297043 0.0819641961636 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...number may have increased by 1% over the year. Regarding the age structure trend...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40084388186 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60626496098 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8544279243 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348140610293 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143385867419 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168016642102 0.0843802449381 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248896440735 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190716297043 0.0819641961636 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.